Essay Structure
- Introduction
- Body paragraphs (at least 3)
- Conclusion
What you need to know
- Structure
- Language
- Interpretations
- Representations
- Context
- Ideas
- Genre
- Values, attitudes, beliefs
- Perspective
Recommended
- Discourse
- Ideology
- Post-colonialism
I have some practise questions, but I forgot to upload them
Introduction
- Opening comments: (hook + introduce topic, text title, author) - Outline/build up to main points - Thesis - Concluding statement
Thesis
What makes a good thesis
- WHAT + HOW (ideas + techniques/conventions)
- Use key terms from the questions
- Be as specific as possible
- Address all parts of the question
- Clear and precise
- Insightful and/or sound ideas showing understanding of the text and of the key concepts of the question
- Engagement/Addresses the question / Focused Reading
- Uses EACH key word and term
- If question has ‘you’, then use I/my
- Uses Course Terms
- Offer a SPECIFIC what (course concept) and how (convention and/or language)
- Clear expression - draft several versions to achieve this
is represented/constructed as through the use of
- The thesis has the potential to make or break hour essay
Body Paragraphs
- How will you group or divide up your ideas?
- Ideas
- Values and attitudes
- Characters
- Other?
Crafting effective topic sentences
- Link clearly and directly to THESIS – USE KEY TERMS - WHAT & HOW - Be specific as you can without overcomplicating the sentence. - Show links to previous paragraphs (use transition words eg Similarly, In addition, However, Therefore, In contrast, Just as …)
Paragraph Structure
- Teachers may use different terminology but the structure and expectations are the same.
Structure 1
- Topic Sentence (TS) with both WHAT and HOW
- Development sentences
- Develop and support your TS to lead into your Evidence—NO NAKED QUOTATIONS
- Evidence—your short quotations from the text
- Explanation—step into word, phrase level, connotations, connections of your quotations
- Extrapolation—step further into or step out of to the course concepts
You need to make AT LEAST two comments on each quotation/piece of evidence. The bulk of your paragraph is explanation and extrapolation (stepping in and stepping out)
Structure 2: TPEEPEE
- yes the name sound stupid, imagine if Michael Jackson needed to go to the bathroom, T’PEEPEE
- Topic Sentence (as above and should of course link clearly to your thesis)
- Developing Sentence(s) if necessary – further developing the main idea in the TS
- Point 1 – 1st point supporting the idea in your TS
- Evidence (as above) for this point 1
- Explanation (as above) stepping into this evidence & how it supports your point
- Point 2 – another point supporting your TS – may build on Point 1
- Evidence for Point 2
- Explanation
- Extrapolation – step out to wider significance – link back to thesis
Variations of these are also acceptable, but the structural elements must all be there and should work together to build a cohesive argument.
Checking your paragraph structure
- Do you clearly and fully address the question?
- Does your topic sentence give WHAT and HOW (ideas + techniques) & link clearly to your thesis?
- Do you make points that support this?
- Do you give evidence from the text to prove these points?
- Do you explain and explore the ideas and language in these examples and possibly link back to wider concepts?
- Do you link back to your thesis, and to other paragraphs?
Conclusion
- Restate thesis
- Summarise main points
- Final statements – extrapolate, step out to wider context, link to Course concepts
Thesis Drafting and Essay Planning
- Using the course concepts and syllabus, begin drafting a thesis statement.
- Consider which of the course concepts you feel most comfortable in addressing.
- Then:
- Begin planning and drafting topic sentences – what points will your essay be addressing?
- Find evidence to support your ideas – try explaining your evidence using the paragraph structure from before
- Complete an essay draft
Outside of class feedback on planning/draft work will not be given the day before an assessment